Linhishyra's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sore Street Romance]

Great ambient, great idea

The style you gave to this is greatly put together, for a moment I thought that keeping everything in just-shadows, would be better, but later on I changed my mind, the whole setting, the story, everithing fits 'til the very end, so, congratulations, is a great piece, so is the song, and definitely the guy playing sax/guitar. A well diserved FP, 5/5, 10/10 (Yes, there's room for improvement, but I liked this one too much to complain:3) Keep up the great job cousin!!

[Walking the Walk]

Spooky

Yet beautifully done, I know it has no relationship at all but it reminded me the Pink Floyd movie.
Great, smooth, attractive. Congrtulations

TheBoogley responds:

walking hammers!! :D

[Ganon's Therapist]

You really got me on "brotherhood"

Hahahaha, hilarious, congratulations

[Wake up for the ending]

That was beautiful

Enought said.
(A question here, what's the name of the tune?)

[[S] Cascade.]

Explain yurself right now

I demand it, there's no way I'll be watching this other five times to get it, I love it, yes but I've got a job and a social life which I won't be able to continue if I don't understand what did just happened, 5/5 and 10/10 right away but dude, seriously, what the hell was that all about? I never thought something could get any more epic after the end of a countdown but you made it, so no more words, that was simply: epic.
I take my hat off.

[Avania: episode 1 part 1]

It's a start...

Certainly you are giving your first steps here and I praise you for that, but there are somethings that you need to put attention to:

- Yes, there are drawing styles that are made to llok messy: but this doesn't feel like that, I recommend you to watch some other animations on styles you find similar to ours, put attention to the details on them since they'll lead you to know how they did them.

- Define your character better: Make some standing still art from different angles until you are confident that you know your character as well as you know some real-life person

- Animate by parts: it seemed to me that you made the whole thing on a run rather than animating the bunny first, then the main character, then the backgrounds. that way you'll put more attention to the details of each part.

- Define your line-art: Some of the traces (like one of an eye blinking) seemed to be done on a rush and carelessly, don't animate on a hurry, take your time, defined lineart and colouring make most of the animations good or bad.

- Have fun: and don't give a damn about aggressie or rude comments, check who says them most will come from people that don't create anything and have no idea of the work behind your art, real artists will guide you rather than mock you (...but not forever so make an effort to improve with their comments).

If I'm being this hard is because I saw ambition on your animation, work hard for it!

Deer50 responds:

thanks :)

[Wonders of the Universe 2]

I demand moar wonders!!!

Although I'm only a disgusting human so my request might be most likely disregarded, I'll ask my cat to submit it for me.
Seroiusly, wonderful and fluid animations, appealing and vibrant. Great comedy and fun, magnificent music, we, the people that really appreciates a good job and not some generic troll, give this animation a 5/5 10/10.

Toonwerks responds:

Humans aren't disgusting! They're actually quite tasty with Heinz 57, but than again so is just about everything else.

Thanks for the review!

[the Internet Pals]

Dude...

Awsome epic full-of pure win. Great animation, and also quite hilarious. Yu've got me ROFLing XD.